Reviews for The Cole Turns To Ash

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eightcorona 2008-08-20 ch 25, anon.	abuseeverything is racist :P
eightcorona 2008-08-19 ch 1, anon.	abusehaha... morbid and funny :D
donghae 2008-08-06 ch 31,	abuseThis is quite possibly one of the best fics I have ever read. Cole is my new favorite persona. He is AMAZING and I damn near demand a sequel, but take as much time as you need, sweet cheeks. Can’t rush perfection. Adding this and you to pretty much every alert and favorite I can on . Dr. Bob = PWN. You have such a wonderful mix of humour, description, lust, pretty boys – guh, can’t take it. You had me laughing through all five hundred chapters and not ONCE was I disappointed. You rock so hardcore. I’m in love. That’s it. I love you. Marry me. We’ll have incredibly beautiful, incredibly talented children who will embark on a great journey to some far away land, enlightening the natives of the wondrousness of gay porn. Guh. Mad kudos for you.
Reader1000 2008-08-04 ch 15, anon.	abuseI like this story but I just got one thing to pick at... It's 'contrary to popular belief' you got it as 'popular to contrary belief'. Just so you know:P
Lady75 2008-07-29 ch 31,	abuseOMG!! i love your story !! \0/ i laugh so hard this story is so funny truley love it ^^ and love the ending you gave me a headache in the middle you know ho's good with cole and all but ofcourse ash is god ^_^ love it ~
Sarena 2008-07-24 ch 31, anon.	abuseHey love. Eek where do I start!? I am a slash addict and I loved this fiction. I loved Cole's inner monologue and he (well technically you) had me cracking up so much! Sometimes I felt a little too perverted though. And you pretty much hit the nail on the head (is that the proper saying?) with the pairings in the end, like Dawson/John, Ashton/Cole & hopefully Trent/Vincent but I would've loved to see more Eerheart (Sorry if I spell any of your character names wrong) & Adam or his ex boyfriend Liam..and someone? And I wished Dom had a happy ending, I really really do because my heart really went out to the poor guy, I know he acted a bit rash (okay like a psycho) but he seemed pretty used and abused by Ashton (who you really did get me to love by the end of it)...I would also know what happened to Nehms and Eyslia? Damn I know I've spelled them wrong. Sorry again. And Marcus and Elijah. Okay I think your getting my point. Maybe you could just buzz me and say 'they all lived happily ever after having amazing butt sex for the rest of their lives'? Just for closure. Oh yeah this a review and I'm supposed to give you constructive critiscm, well I noticed a couple of typos occasionally but they were pretty rare and they didn't like deter me from the story but it wouldn't hurt to get a beta to fix them up for you. I don't think there should be any changes to the story though, I will say it again, I loved it! And seriously, slash fiction really needs this, open, honest, HEAPS OF SEX. Well I mean really the only thing to say about this, is 'More Please?' but if your not feeling up to it, this was great in itself and I'm happy the golden couple made it in the end. I cracked up so much in this story but I really can't tell you why cause I've sort of forgotten. Anyway I've stolen the quote 'sugar cookie orgasm central' because it was adorable. Um hmm what else, okay wait Vincent's complete insanity made me laugh a few times for sure! I think that's enough ranting. Love you long time. Hearts and kisses and all that jazz.
cheshiremiko 2008-07-23 ch 31, anon.	abuseThis is an awesome effin story! You dont even understand how many times I got looked at funny by my parents because I was cracking up out of nowhere. And jez...I love Cole so much. He thinks so much like I do its scary. God! I wish I went to Cole's school! I mean seriously! So many freakin gay boys in one school!! Though I cant complain, Cole's hardly seemed like it had any lesbos which my school is full of...so Im lucky there... Oh, oh, oh I have a gay, creepy, pedoprinciple too! Wel I think he is...he probably isnt, but he acts like one! So yeah, anyways... You are a awesome writer! keep up the great work!
TheCresentMoonWriter 2008-07-21 ch 31,	abuseWas this a Catholic school in the story? If so; messed up catholic school!... BUT I LOVED IT ANYWAY! This was seriously an awsome story! LOVED IT! LOVED IT!! LOVED IT! This was SO funny! I loved Vincent SO much! Another thing, I noticed you don't have the one-shot or the sequel up. Are still going to write them or post them or what ever? I hope you do because you can't leave us hanging with that stuff. Its just... mean, and cruel, and wrong. Great job!
Skitty Pink 2008-07-15 ch 31,	abuseYay for future sequel! ilu.
Skitty Pink 2008-07-14 ch 25,	abuseI was going to review after i finished what you have up, but i couldn't resist when you mentioned Animorphs. I use to LOVE that series, and Jake on the cover of the books, cute...can't say the same for tv series Jake cough. Anyways, this story is awesome and ridiculously hilarious, in a good way. Love.love.love it. ok. goes back to reading
JtheChosen1 2008-07-11 ch 31,	abuseomg that was one of the FUNNIEST stories i have ever read! seriously, i was cracking up every chapter!
firedraygon97 2008-07-09 ch 31,	abuseEveryone's so CRAZY in this, haha. I love Cole and his tangents and his perverted mental Santa. Lovely work with this. I'll be sure to check out the sequel! ~fd97
Frickin Fuzzy Pandas 2008-07-01 ch 1,	abuseThis entire story was amazing.Like, OMIGAWDZ BEST STORY EVUR! amazing. ^.^ The fact that you mentioned Jeffree Star in Chapter 27 just made my day,thank you.Haha, sorry I'm a Jeffree fan.:] I'm just going to shut up now, and wait eagerly for the sequel.^.^
Sw33tR0ze 2008-06-29 ch 12,	abuseDom puses him off the stage and Ashton is still the dumb ass he is and decided to go back out with him? Seriously I don't feel back for Psycho dom anymore, Ashton needs to leave him behind. Dom needs to go to a frickin insane asylum. Ah well who wouldn't break up with ash? if it meant saving your life. Aw Marcus and E. Can he walk? I'm gonna be honest, I decided to drop this story, and so I skipped to the ending which made no sense whatsoever. But it's addicting, and so I keep reading. I like Trent too.
Sw33tR0ze 2008-06-29 ch 11,	abuseOkay Dom is mental like one of those creepy stalker people. Has ASh been in his room? and if so he is SO crazy to be with him. YA he broke up with him! Yes ASHTON is a TOTAL asshole! he needs to apologies to Dom too! Psh I feel after ashton has his way with Cole that he'll break up with him and run back to Dom. But if Dom had any sense he'd move on and forget about him! Seriously their all starting to sound like a bunch of f* chicks. Was that Ash on the phone? he has serious issues. Their better be a f*ing happy ending at the end of this story! even though I know it's not your "style" . Okay so maybe it wasn't but than why did ASh give him that #? maybe it's one of his ex (es?)

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