Hahaha, I love this **. Makes me laugh. Vincent is my favorite.

Interesting start. It takes a very special kind of story to get me to read it (When in first POV, which I usually don't like)

This seems like it won't be one of those first POVs that turn out... anyways, yeah! Good first chapter!

Will take me forever to read it all, but I'm going to give it a chance!

/Ramble

SO ** GOOD. Jezz I haven't laughed that hard in ages. Love cole, AND CRIES FOR ASHY. They're adorable actually. I think. I'm still ** snorting every five seconds trying to hold back my laughing cause my mom's staring at me from the other side of the room. One hell of a story and I wish i'd found it sooner! I hope to ** god you write a sequel PLEASE. YOUR WRITING IS AWESOME! he he.

GAH. i frickin loove your writing. its hilarious and wtf @ rachizzle. there is nothing wrong with your use of punctuation and there is nothing wrong with the amount of sex. the amount of sex is alkjkdlfjsldkfjdsf wonderful. if not, there should be more, not less. :D

So hi[: umm well I was mYchemicaLromancE13 idk if you remember me cause it's been AGES but I'm finally reviewing, yes I missed a few chapters but this is on
my iPhone so I'm just going with it. Well, I must say that you are doing an outstanding job and I'm so sorry I haven't read this sooner, i actually did start from the beginning and I started yesterday *giggles* you're just so amazing. Now why I coulnt resist?? My name is Paige and this ** I hate name is Chelsea spelled the same way and everything and oh I called her that before, but you want to know the best thing? I live in Texas. Haha, northeast but still just the irony in all of that just sent me overboard. You're brillant dollface.

I love this story so much! It's hilarious! There were parts that made me sad, like reading about Ash's past but I loved the part when Ash got mad Cole and asked him who he was. There were so many random things in this story, but I think that's what made it funny. ^^ You must've had fun writing this. lol, this was such a great story and I'm glad to hear there'll be a sequel. XD

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What the hell? ... This was ... oh my god ... lots of nonsense, I suppose. There were several times I just wanted to stop reading and go find something else ... but I didn't ... still not completely sure why. Some part of me just couldn't go up and press the back button, so I went forward instead. ... And I suppose Cole grew on me ... in his ... own ... very weird way ...

I think my brains melted ... In a good way ... I think ...

I can honestly say that I have never read anything like this before ... and I want to read the sequel ... but I think I'll wait until it's completed. For some reason, I don't think my brain will let me continue reading if I try to do it chapter by chapter.

Sorry, this really isn't meant to be a flame. I liked it. It was a fun (if different) read. Definitely not my usual.

good luck with the Sequel
Allanasha Ke Kiri

Wow. Love Ashton, almost hate trent, used to love Vincent, and cole? He's freakin amazing.
You are totaly my idol now! I wish my stories were half as good as yours cos that'd be awesome. Yeah, they aren't though. Ugh im a totaly pity party at the moment. SEE WHAT YOU'VE DONE TO mE?

Love how you're attacking this story :)

Entertainment with a capital E!

'I hate apples.

I hate how they just scream GERMS at you.

Especially, when you're in the supermarket and they're in that pile ontop of eachother like they're having a ** fruit orgy and people touch them with hands full of uncleanliness. They're disgusting. As is all touchable fruit. Everything should be in a can. You know what I also hate? Saturdays. Saturday is the day that I have to go to the supermarket to buy the germ-filled fruit for my workaholic Aunt and her **. Half German Shepherd, half dinosaur **. But, back to the fruit for a minute, you know how AIDs started? Some ** from another country brought an apple on a plane. He shoves this apple into his pocket and it's on the plane so germs are everywhee and they all go to the apple. It's like there's a sign above the apple, "PARTY AT MY PLACE!". Colds and flus and weird diseases copulating on the fleshy fruit. He gets off in Austin, Texas and BAM. AIDs to your ** door. It's communism with the mask of anarchy. It's a revolution of fruit and they're out to ** get you. One bite at a time.

So, hi. I'm Cole.'

Brilliant. You are ** brilliant, man. (:

oh babe you made me laugh so much with this story that i feel really bad now that is over.
er, well, first to say, i'm french, so forgive my english, i'm not sure i can write it well. okay, i'm sure i can't but i'm doing it for you, i'm trying to help you to reach the 10 reviews, so please, you'll criticize my english another time.
and now, i also feel like i need to say that you're insane. at first, not so much, though i was seriously confused quite often, but i don't know what the ** happened to you but the story went really really crazy. and i was confused. like, more. like a lot.
but it was so ** good and i was like ohmygodiwantyoutobemybff or ohmygodiwanttobecole and ohmygodihopethiswilastforever and, well, you can see my point, i was all ohmygodsomething.
your characters are awesome. i think they change a lot through the story, becoming, er, you know, like superfreakingweirdos but i'm in love with them all. er not all. ashton confused me a lot (yes i know it's easy to get me confused, but that's beside the point and you were clearly not helping me not to be. if that makes any sense since, you know, my not-being-english thing). i didn't like that much last chapter for that reason, because i was missing cole POV. well, since you actually finish with his POV i dn't know why i am complaining. oh, and in fact, i really like how last chapter remember us of prologue, because as i said i felt like the characters and the story went all crazy and it makes the whole thing more coherent.
god. i woulld like to say so much more because your story really made my week, and i want to stalk you now (that's a compliment), and you're really awesome and i love you and stuff, but i fell a bit confu... AWKWARD when i write reviews so. yeah. i'm done. just know that i loved your story a lot, even though i didn't manage to say you all what i wanted to.

I love Cole's character. I've never fallen in love with such an odd minded character before. The way he thinks had me laughing until the end. Awesome story!

I am very excited right now. I have succumbed to the lure of FictionPress...and I am very glad that I did. XD

I wanted something amazing to read...and I found it. Now off I go...to read the rest!!

*beats up naked penguin fetus for pope... applies hello kitty sticker on her?his? forehead* dont worry...we still love you. lol i feel bad b/c i didnt know there was going to be a sequel so. still one of my favoritests! :D adios