Reviews for Into Nothingness - FictionPress.com

S. Ben Beach 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abuseI liked the speech part... "Pray was all I crave for" - that slightly confuses me, Perhaps a typo or something? But other than that, pretty solid. :)
bitterlyysweetchoco 2007-01-25 ch 1,	abuseVery heavy. I love the intense emotion. I also love how vague the topic is. Who knows what you are writing about. All we (the readers) know is that it was AGONIZING! (brilliant dear!)
Retro Gunslinger 2007-01-07 ch 1,	abuseNicely done description of a very quick thing. Once again, great word choice, though the word "interacted" feels a tad stiff.
hateandkill-D 2006-12-30 ch 1,	abuseCool! Great job on this, it's really good!
braindead1345 2006-12-28 ch 1,	abuseFor some reason this reminds me of the sid visious/ nacy thing...do you know whatim talking about? well, he was high on...some thing and sid and nacy where in LOVE man, you know? (you know who sid is right? the drumer for the Sex Pistols)and he killed her, very burtal he ripped out her vocal cords so noone would hear her scream... and then he felt so aweful that he hung him self in prison...tis sad...:( but anyway this poem reminded me of them...good poem! thanks for the reciew!