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| Blueskelton 2007-01-08 ch 1,   | That one was spot on. Perfect. |
| DunxDunxDunx 2006-12-30 ch 1, | it made sense to me i hate the feeling of losing control when its like yer mind has taken over yer bodys on autopilot && thoughtsd just come out randommly i didnt really notice the improper grammaer//i think it added to the effect of the piece good job! |
| Rosey Prosey 2006-12-27 ch 1, | A brilliant formulation of ideas that really makes you think. Well done! |
| Frore 2006-12-27 ch 1, | Awesome! Great descriptions, I do not care if it was meant to make sense. This is a piece that you could probably dissect later and take out those metaphors that you do like, and slap them in another story, like a stockpile. Wonderful work here, really. |