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| PrincessPeaches 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseAww sweet! |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseAMEN! I no this feeling a little to well. Great Poem!! So going in my favorits. |
| RandoMaia 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseHere's the return review you asked for ^^ Wow. Nice. I really liked this. Nice structure, and I really liked the message. Very true. A minor, minor thing: "knowing your in misery" uses the wrong 'your'; should be "you're." And yeah, this is probably because I'm an editor's daughter... xD Actually, though, in the summary or whatever at the bottom of your profile, you use the wrong 'no' (instead of "know"). I don't mean to sound nitpicky (even though I guess I am), I'm just letting you know, because those are the kind of things that make some people go 'eh, this stuff isn't worth reading.' Meh, Iono... but I did really like this poem. Apologies for the nitpicking... -Maia ^^ |
| MikaelaBanes 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseSo true. You are so good at this. You rock!! |
| undescribableMONiiCA. 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abusePlease spare me a well rounded review. This is the first type of love poem I've written. |