| Reviews for I can't live without you: In so many words |
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LyricsArePoetry 3/2/08 . chapter 1Aww sweet! |
XxXKristie MarieXxX 2/2/07 . chapter 1AMEN! I no this feeling a little to well. Great Poem! So going in my favorits. |
RandoMaia 12/27/06 . chapter 1Here's the return review you asked for Wow. Nice. I really liked this. Nice structure, and I really liked the message. Very true. A minor, minor thing: "knowing your in misery" uses the wrong 'your'; should be "you're." And yeah, this is probably because I'm an editor's daughter... xD Actually, though, in the summary or whatever at the bottom of your profile, you use the wrong 'no' (instead of "know"). I don't mean to sound nitpicky (even though I guess I am), I'm just letting you know, because those are the kind of things that make some people go 'eh, this stuff isn't worth reading.' Meh, Iono... but I did really like this poem. Apologies for the nitpicking... -Maia |
ziva-in-the-rain 12/27/06 . chapter 1So true. You are so good at this. You rock! |
MokikaStyle 12/27/06 . chapter 1Please spare me a well rounded review. This is the first type of love poem I've written. |