I have a very strong feeling that this poem should be a song! I don't know, I could almost hear music behind it as I read it. :-) I liked it, especially "tear down cheek is your silent protest" and "there's a door to my heart Leave, you're no longer welcome here." Those are nice images.

Thanks for the review!

This is the first poem I've read on this site so far. I think it is very beautiful.

Lilz

you reviewed somehting of mine so I sent you a reply to that. Then I checked out your profile and saw what you wrote about rathering people review, so here I am.

Anyway, about the poem: I didn't really like the aabb rhyme scheme. it makes it osund a bit juvenile and cheesy... but the poem itself was ok...

This was really good, thanks for reviewing my story. Sorry I didn't review sooner!