Reviews for War of The Sword - FictionPress.com

Kier Haliana 2007-11-24 ch 15,	abuseI like how Lyn and Chanel can giggle in a serious situation. Okay Kai is truly and idiot. "You're just floating there." Doesn't that just scream something wrong? Lol, it was rather funny. Kai is a funny one.
Kier Haliana 2007-11-24 ch 14,	abuseLook at that, it works. I decided to start here. I don't know why, I'll go back later and submit reviews. I love how the females and the males are all having the same general conversation before they go to bed. Man, they have to do a lot to gain those powers.
Linku-kun 2007-06-16 ch 1,	abuseAmazing! This story is a work of genius. Such a dramatic storyline with action, romance, and twists you would never see coming. Its a very good original literary work. Good job!
Kier Haliana 2006-12-27 ch 2,	abuseThat was nearly the same as last time. There is a lot of different kind of marble in that castle. I would hate to fall down the stairs in that place. One thing, don't be so upfront with description. You present a clear picture but it's all sort up thrown at the reader. At times, describe through actions. Just some advice someone gave me once. But other than that, I like it. I'm happy to be reading this again. I hope you had a great holiday! ~Kier
Kier Haliana 2006-12-27 ch 1,	abuseWow, you changed it a lot. There is much more added in this part alone. Huh, I'm interested to see what else you have changed. I'm glad you started posting again.