Reviews for The Protector Of Perley

Reviews For: The Protector Of Perley

Alteng 2007-01-05 ch 3,	Alright the emails are working on Fictionpress again. I didn't realize that you reviewed one of my stories. yeah, Chance shows up soon in that story. It was fun, what can I say. Your Chance seems more the kind of fellow that James had in mind for his character. Yeah, I think Chance needed to go on a long extravagant story about how Ray was torturing him and could she set him free. The village itself is showing some interesting little signs in and of itself. It makes it a bit on the creepy side.
Purple Badger 2007-01-01 ch 3,	Another good chapter, there, well done. :-) I really wanna' know what Chance and Ray gotta' do with this now... And I'm starting to wonder if he likes Imogen or the other way around... She came to his room, after-all. ;] And don't think I didn't notice her doing her hair! Haha. xD Anyways, keep it up.
Two Pence Worth 2006-12-31 ch 3,	I'm intrigued now... Just what is going to happen? 'Cause it says the monster is long-gone... Yes, I'd say I'm gripped. [: Well done on that front. And also watch the random typo's. We all make them, but whey-hey! Nice mix of genre and everything in there. Keep it up. Luvvehmush. xP Heh.
Rikkity 2006-12-30 ch 1,	All seems good so far. I'll be reading onwards!
Purple Badger 2006-12-29 ch 2,	O! That was a fast update. Thanks for that. [: Anyways, to my comments! I LOVE CHANCE! Hehe. And the 'same room' moment was great. I like how you've got bits of comedy, bits of randomness and then dramatic bits. Poor Alys though, all Ill now... It's nice how Rose still cares after all this time, even though she seems like a drunk mother-from-hell now. Lmao. All in all, way to go. I'm still lvoing it. But I noticed a few typos, most likely. And chapter 'Two' should be 'One'... I'm assuming? Anyways, keep going!
Alteng 2006-12-29 ch 2,	I am amused. I have a character named Chance in 'The Purple Unicorn' story, and he is a charismatic thief, who is rather on the gay side of things. I also have a character named Kel in that story. He has blue hair. This story moves along well, and I am rather interested in this Redd guy. He was a peculiar piece in that first chapter. I like the relationship that you have created between Ray and Chance, and the looks from the audience about the one room was hilarous, because I would have done the same thing in my stories, but I usually write comedy, mind you. Although you are not writing a comedy, you did set these two up for some comic relief.
Alteng 2006-12-29 ch 1,	I chose this story due to your summary. So, I bite. This was a very exciting piece, and it kept me well interested. Your description was good, and you leave enough to the imagination to cause horror to this story.
Two Pench Worth 2006-12-28 ch 1,	Heh, I do love it! It seems realistic too (Not obviously in the literal sense, because it is fantasy and there is some sort of beast, but...). I mean in the sort-of style of it, and time period, and the fact they didn't save the child. (Yet?). Well done, luvvehmush. x
Purple Badger 2006-12-28 ch 1,	The Yuff has her spark for fiction again! Even though that was just an introductiion it still caught my attention. It's a really good start abd I wanna' know what's going to happen. Will the next chapters be in the future? I bet Redd is going to become ultra cool. xD Or maybe just 'I wish'. Hehe. [:
a bitter kiss. 2006-12-27 ch 1,	Oh, sounds like this will be a cool story. And since I have no hope in fantasy, I applaud you. :D
LightfootLee 2006-12-27 ch 1,	sweet. This is going to be an awesome story. I cant wait to read more

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