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| Lisa98 2007-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseha amazing and intriging |
| Itamidome 2007-01-26 ch 1, | abuseShort and simple, yet powerful. |
| poetic abortion 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuse"this is not a happy ending but you might think so anyway." Beautiful first two lines--an amazing first stanza. And, oh, it was really beautiful and powerful and-- "he finally sees me" That hurt, and was so true. So. Ridiculously. TRUE. Love it. - Noelle |
| Aquafied 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseheartbeat before a car crash it seems epic almost |
| lessons you learn 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseGive me your writing skills plzkthnx. XD No, really, though. This is heartbreaking but wonderful at the same time. |
| Ellin Louise 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI love how this poem is short, simple and uses no capitals and little punctuation. It allows the words to speak for themselves, which they do very well. |
| Zero-Sum 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusevery... cinematic. i like it. |
| ThisCut-UpAngel 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseShort and simple..not something everyone accomplishes well, but dear this is amazing. |
| lackluster 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abusereading it mindlessly then going back to the beginning...i think you brought me back. love it. |
| lastchance02 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI love it, I really do. |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI like the way your writing has evolved. I love reading everything you've written, starting with the earliest, ending with the newest. I odn't know why, but it makes me less heavy. Yeah. I think your a god. :D |
| bread and circuses 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abusedeceptively simple. the image i get from this is very cinematic. i really really like it. |