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Reviews For: Life in Disarray

Circles in the Water
2007-01-14
ch 2,
abuseYay, a new chapter...and I loved it. A pity about them (Astrid and Danny) not being as close. And also sad about Nick going for three years, but I'm sure everything will work out. Can't wait for an update :)
Circles in the Water
2006-12-28
ch 1,
abuseAwsome start. I always love little snippets of the past being the opening to a story.
I know what it's like to get reviews and to not get reviews so I hope this makes you smile. Cheers, can't wait for more, you write well. I salute you for writing in third person as I find it quite hard, so my hat goes off to you. :)
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