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| tundra101 2008-08-19 ch 26,  | abuseYour stories are really good, I bet you could get them published. I'd buy them!. |
| a.crayon.called.awesome. 2008-08-02 ch 26, | abuseit is now 3:51 in the a.m. and i have just finished reading this fantastical story. the one which you should update. :) pretty please? with gummy bears on top? peace and love -a.c.c.a. |
| Hannah C. Thaw 2008-07-08 ch 26, | abuseSo I have to admit that I have started reading your story like four times, and never continued it. Either that or there is another story that has a very similar beginning. Anyway, I love your story. It is really entertaining. Personally I think Angelica's luck sucks. She doesn't have an easy life. And I think Emile and Renard are the same person. Merged or something. SO I have very strong opinions about forgiveness in stories, oftentimes it seems like the character always forgives too early. Here are my contrasting feelings: I wanted her to be mad at Shatael and Cato longer and Emile shorter. Random I know. Keep writing! |
| aznangel650 2008-07-01 ch 26, anon. | abuseThis is a great plot line. The only thing I am confused about is the shift from Renard to Emile. You might want to have someone read over each chapter before you put it out. There are a lot of common errors in here. Also, you might want to go back and revise some more so the story flows more smoothly. This story is kind of choppy and improving the flow would help make more sense. All in all, I really like the chemistry and Angelica is a wonderful and spunky character. The feel of the modern American in her contrasts well with the more proper French halfling. :) |
| atreyu love 2008-06-27 ch 26, | abusehaha, theyre having a babay, taht is so adorable :) and what about the Lions claw? whos was it? and who is it from? and what are these memories OF? hmm, PLEASE UPDATE! :D |
| atreyu love 2008-06-27 ch 24, | abusewhos is it? renards? hmm. |
| atreyu love 2008-06-26 ch 21, | abuseI cant believe Renard died and that the king found the ring. thats bitter sweet. for some reason, i think the king is Renards reincarnation. |
| atreyu love 2008-06-26 ch 18, | abusei am utterly confused. where is Renard? and who is this guy? i dont understand at all :( |
| atreyu love 2008-06-26 ch 10, | abuseI would never forgive him for sleeping with Michelle. |
| Maria Courtiarre 2008-06-22 ch 26, | abuseAg. Not exactly a cliff hanger, but it definitely leaves me wanting more :] |
| PeterMoore 2008-06-05 ch 26, | abusethis is such an amaxing stiry and please update soon. 'm so happy emilie and angi got together. they seem perfect for each other. she seems better with him then she was with renard. she actually seems that she is in love with emilie and he with her. |
| SapphireEyes16 2008-05-30 ch 26, | abuseit'z a girl! and u finally updated!, keep updating cant wait 4 the nxt chappy! |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-05-30 ch 26, | abuseaw. how cute!! It's a girl! yay. This was another great chapter, although long awaited. But I'm one to talk. School has held me off from my story too. nasty institution...I still suck at spelling...I hope you update soon and we find out what these memories add up to. Oh, also, it's cute that Shatel likes her. I thought that he only had a sick manly/torture interest in her before. =] |
| Seeker of Knowledge 2008-05-28 ch 26, | abusei never seem to know what to write for these but i really felt i needed to as i liked this story so much, so: i love this story, esp. angi shes an awesome character and you can't help but feel for her looking forwards eagerly to the next chapter (>^) SoK (^ |
| elliew 2008-05-27 ch 26, anon. | abusewoo hoo...thank you for updating i was getting worried you had abandoned us. xx |