|Reviews for Make Believe|
| BookcraZzaY 3/29/11 . chapter 1
this is just-stunning I can't believe someone wrote such an elegant piece
| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur 6/20/09 . chapter 1
I really liked this, how you showed that love is only obscure happiness, used to make yourself feel better about yourself. It was beautifully written. Very nice.
Although, I wish there had been some punctuation here & there, but all in all, good.
-Rawr from the RM, link on my page.
| Snow and Spindrift 2/28/07 . chapter 1
wonderful poem, i love the cadence of it: seems so effortless and fluid. nice job!
| Fan Fan 2/24/07 . chapter 1
Never to return...beautiful moment captured in a beautifully written poem. I love this work.
| Jodie Sinclair 1/7/07 . chapter 1
aww I love this one Abby. especially the begining
| Melissa O'Day 1/5/07 . chapter 1
oh yay! i absolutly love it! country songs...heck yeah...u stold my idea! hah hah just kiddin! thank you so mcuh for the comments u made my day!
| S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G 1/3/07 . chapter 1
The message in this is great. I loved the emotion, and it was a good poem. I applaud you.
| Jarlaxe 12/27/06 . chapter 1
That was excellent, I like how you gave love a voice in song, well not you exactly, but how you said how love can be given a voice...yes I have no idea what im talking about ;( haha. Well good job anyways that was very nice.