this is just-stunning I can't believe someone wrote such an elegant piece

I really liked this, how you showed that love is only obscure happiness, used to make yourself feel better about yourself. It was beautifully written. Very nice.

Although, I wish there had been some punctuation here & there, but all in all, good.

-Rawr from the RM, link on my page.

wonderful poem, i love the cadence of it: seems so effortless and fluid. nice job!

Never to return...beautiful moment captured in a beautifully written poem. I love this work.

aww I love this one Abby. especially the begining

oh yay! i absolutly love it! country songs...heck yeah...u stold my idea! hah hah just kiddin! thank you so mcuh for the comments u made my day!

The message in this is great. I loved the emotion, and it was a good poem. I applaud you.

-Ally

That was excellent, I like how you gave love a voice in song, well not you exactly, but how you said how love can be given a voice...yes I have no idea what im talking about ;( haha. Well good job anyways that was very nice.