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| tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 3,  | abuseYou have a great sense of humor. Legiehn is hysterical, and the exchange with Kas made me laugh. Bravo! |
| tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseExcellent beginning. I'm enthralled already. LOL |
| Midnights Scream 2007-03-12 ch 5, | abuse:) It was good, but I have no idea who these characters are. *sweatdrop* hehehehe |
| Midnights Scream 2007-02-06 ch 4, | abuseLOL. this story has caught my interest though all the new people introduced at once has confused me on who's who, but I think I'll figure it out soon or later. :) Nice start. |
| sporkess 2007-02-06 ch 4, | abuseWell, I've read a few of your stories, but I very rarely review because I'm a lazy slob. But I have decided I must change my evil ways, and so I've decided to let you know how utterly I love and adore you - and, incidentally, this story. It's such an interesting concept, if one that sounds a bit more dangerous than your average tournament, and the characters you've created to go in it are ver intriguing. I wish we knew more about everyone's backstory - I love characters with heaps of depth, but it gets frustrating when you can only see one layer of them and you *know* that there's more! I'm particularly interested in the story of how Kas and Belkin met, although I think Legiehn's relationship with his wife would also be worthy of exploration. And I really want to see where you're going with the unnamed man in segment 2... I may have to follow you to your LJ and see if you're dropping hints. Anyway, thanks for a great story - and if I can't find any more of it on your LJ, I hope you update soon. |
| Esquirella 2007-01-22 ch 3, | abuseI really like your writing style, and the story is fascinating. I'd love to know the backstory on Belkin and Kas. |