I'm really loving this. I think you should continue. Plus the threesome thing is soo hot. Pleasee Update soon =)

OMG! Liked it! was good cant wait to read the rest.

this was great I really liked peyton the whole scene was great i think and well written in my eyes anyway

Can't wait for next chapter!

So she's a freshman, her brother's a senior, the Parker twins are what, exactly? This is really confusing.

hey, i like this story so far, looking forward to a quick - :) - update

The concept is interesting. I like it. However I didn't like the profanity. Other than that, this is a good start. Keep going!

oh, that is so funny. please continue it as soon as posible! please! thank you if you do!

LOL! Excellent beginning. Can't wait for more.

hahaha that last part was SO FUNNY! I was dieing of laughter lol. I can not wait to see where this is going lol hahaha

hey^^
this is a really good story please continue cause i want to know what is going to happen next... i have a really good feeling that laurell and .. edmund will get together

I like it!!

hmm i like it, i think i could even grow to love it lol keep on i want to see where this goes

hahah, this was pretty funny! update soon!

ah, made me crack up. Great, great. Can't wait to read more. :)