This is a really interesting story! I really enjoyed it!
Please update as soon as possible!

Action packed--and it was only the prologue! Brilliant, I say. I love it. Is it a modernday western? Sorry, I'm a bit slow. Anyways, this is great, so please update!

Neat. I'm gonna stay tuned, for I'm also planning to write a western. Well, semi- western. Kinda futuristic, with motorcycles. :)

thats a bit scary. she has anger issues.

Well, he had it coming to him. It kind of reminded me of Chicago, only a different time period. And the complete and utter lack of the "Cell Block Tango". I loved it. I hope you update soon!

I really like it.
One thing is that it's a bit of a cop-out how evil Edwin is so her killing him isn't quite the bad deed it could be, but I suppose that's redeemed when she kills the woman.
Everything else I love, this is really well-written, keep it up!

Love the prologue! One of the better writing styles I've seen on this site. I'll definitely tune in to the chapters =)

Heh, adrenaline can make you do some crazy things, eh? There is nothing wrong with the writing, but I don't think the woman who was with Edwin had really done anything wrong.

That is, if I read it right and Lily killed the woman. It would be neat if the other woman helped Lily hide the body and such.

As long as Lily's the kind of woman who would do that, then its okay. She's gonna be caught fast if she just wanders out with that rifle in her arms!

love it keep going