Hey, Dice here,

Well, I think this story was well-written. Very beautiful and emotional. I like your style. The biggest thing I disliked, however, is how melodramatic it is. I mean, she spent many years crying because a guy left her? A few months is understandable. A year? Sure. But years? That jumps beyond drama and into melodrama. Because of that, this story was hard for me to like.

So I didn't like the story, but I do like your writing style. Perhaps I should check out your other work.

Anyway, I'll catch you later.

--Dice Darwin

Wow... that was beautiful. I can't think of anything critical to say! Beautiful work, and keep up the great job if you plan to write more (which I hope you do =^o^=)! ( :: )

wow, that was really beautiful. you have an amazing writing style, kind of poetic.