I just read this all in one night was such a wonderful story It has helped me to get the confidence to ask the girl of my dreams out and for that I thank you.

I know it's been a long time since you have done anything on your profile and it's most likely you do not use ficpress anymore but if you do and you see this review just remember people still want to know howthe sequel ends and if any others readers read this just give this story a review and we can get more attention to this story and maybe the sequel finished.

Also in chapter 28 in sara's letter it uses the name sloane I guess this is your real name and that you might like to remove it ;)

All the best Ellie

PS I think you should probably add this last chapter to the sequel instead. Give people their happy ending :P They will check your author page for a sequel anyway.

Can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews. It felt really authentic - different from a lot of the mush around ;D

I think a lot of what I could say has already been said by other reviewers, but the one thing I really did like, especially at the beginning was that you get the point of view from the 'popular girl', which is quite rare, it's normally the other way round. So this was almost like a guilty pleasure for me D

Hope it works out for you, to be honest I'm a bit scared to read the sequel O_o.

"I don't like you in so-many-levels."

made me laugh so hard P

Thank you for this story I'm really loving it.

wow this chapter was really good, seems like the story took off here. I loved that 'unnatural' line.

And also that paragraph in one of the previous chapters that started '...in the shadow of the weeping willow'.

Let me just say that I adore this story so much. This is, I believe, the 3rd time I've read it and I can say, I will probably read it again in the future. I love your characters, they are in my opinion, flawless (even if in the story they have flaws). I just love the story line they followed through. It made me laugh and it made me tear up. Great work. Keep writing. :D

this is a beautiful story

wait was it like an actual card?

lol?

awsome

omg this is too sad D':

L to the O to the L

haha

awwsoome

:)

hooked

This story is beautiful.

I just finished reading this, and while I'm much to tired and speechless to say much at the moment,(If I can get the nerve to, I will say more so in a review for chapter 28) I really just want to say i wish this story had ended on Chapter 28...both in real life and the fiction. Knowing this is a true story, and how much shit you've already went through it really tears at the heart to know that things did not go smoothly from here on out, but you in fact had to endure even more.

The vagueness of this chapter drives me insane as it really leaves one to wonder how this all ends. Are you two still together as a couple, or just friends now? The fact that question is important (to me) shows how much you were able to involve me in your life through your work for me to want things to be ok in the end. I know in several authors notes you indicate you and Sara are still together in some fashion, which really makes me hope, but the words in this chapter are just so ominous it frankly scares the shit out of me.

I know at the point of this review, your sequel is 12 chapters in and you haven't updated in a decent while. Considering the importance of these stories I really am hoping finishing the sequel is of some degree of high priority for you. Regardless, while I will probably watch for updates like a hawk, I lack the heart and strength to read it until you finish. I hope you can forgive me but reading something as heart wrenching as what I fear your sequel is, and being forced to wait for updates would literally kill me. Whether the ending is good or bad, I want to be able to read it it one lump sum. Again, please forgive my weakness _

PS. For the love of god,unless its completely fluff with no /drama next to the romance, I will flip out if you do a third part D: And hurry up and finish this sequel so I can read it _

This story has affected me so badly. The night I finished this story, I didn't sleep. I didn't eat the next day, or sleep the next night. Love makes people the happiest that they possibly could be- and it makes them the most depressed they could ever be. Love stinks. I'm sorry for everything that has happend between you guys.

Jag beklagar till deras förlust om älska.

hi there. normally here, I would point out how immature my review is going to be, but no, not this time. I don't know what to say, how to say it, if i knew what that 'it' is in the first place. To roughly put this, I'm speechless. I have waited for this story for a while. Then I set it on the back of my mind, put away, hidden, in a place where i put all the stories that I've read. but every once in a while, thoughts would trigger out, slowly, craw in to me. in to my brain. about what happened between you guys. This story, you, Sara (if i have the right to call her that), made me think a lot, a lot harder than what a normal girl my age would think; or should think. Makes me wonder what really is love? I truly, and i really did, and still do believe, what you two shared was love, it was love, a once in a life time love. Most people would pity and say 'sad that it ended', but i'm guessing that isn't what you want? or you have heard enough of that? but I guess, like you pointed out, both of you were ignorant of love, ignorant of 'how' to love each other. - this love, whether in your eyes, in my eyes, in everyone's eyes, no matter how pure, or how stained, - it taught you something, it TEACHES us something. For that i'm greatful, honestly, that you wrote this out, that you let us know, let me know. Let me try, and allow us to try and peek in your lives no matter how minor we are.

I hope, I can only hope, its the only thing i can do; that you guys are living a fairly tale love, making choices that you would not regret - no matter how painful it is, or righteous others tell you. Make no mistakes, make no regrets - make memories, make love.

Normally, I'd try and crack a joke here and there, but this story, disabled that. I'm not sad about it, I'm merely too scared to say anything, to scared to choose my words, i can't say 'hey nice update! hope you update soon' because it's not something merely out of a person's imagination, for that, i'm afraid. I'm afraid that things will go wrong, or things went wrong; and most importantly, I'm scared, i'm scared that its too real. I'm scared that it will happen to me, happen to others like you, happen all over again. but like wise, what i said in the beginning of this review; i'm truly humbly and royally speechless. I hope. I hope you make the right choices. I hope. There would be no regret, I hope. I truly hope the best would fall upon you, and Sara. With all my heart and soul, I hope for you two, for love.

Omok - the girl who talks too much even if its pointless.