Good start... somewhat rushed, true, but I still liked it and with so many opponents, I wonder how will you break the fights, especially since neither Zora nor Dhalia seem to be in condition to do battle. Plus such a cliffy... you must update soon!
Great job!

Great ending to the arc... I loved the way Folko beat Habib. Man, he's scary. And that premonition. Off to read more!

ARGH! What a cliffy! You're just evil. I must say Folko isn't doing so good, but Halan doesn't seem like he's doing much better. Zora rocks, btw. I liked her fight, granted she was having too much trouble with that injury. Off to read more!

ARGH! What a cliffy! How dare you? XD
Anyways: the chapter was great. Sorta rushed, but it didn't bother me all that much and the antagonists for this arc are intriguing. Sure hope you'll update soon.
Excellent work!

Nice ending to the arc... I really like Folko now and I'm glad he tagged along, but those figures at the end worry me. Wonder when we'll get to see more of them.
Until then: it was a great chapter and can't wait to read the next!

I must say I enjoyed Zora's fight... it's good to see she can handle herself, even when wounded, especially since she doesn't show much fighting skills up til now.
Folko seems to have some trouble and Halan looks like he's majorily screwed! I need to know what happens next!

Poor Folko. Heh, I'm glad Folko is smart enough to work with Halan. I really like this chapter because you revealed Folko's past. For some strange reason, I'm liking Dhalia more and more with her funny personality. Sorry, I couldn't leave a long review but awesome chapter.

Ha ha ha! I knew Folko was a cool character. So he's hawk hybrid, huh? Now he's super cool character! As usual, the fight scenes are a sight to behold. Lol even though it's reading, I can imagine the fight scenes in my mind. Reading the next chapter soon.

For some reason, I couldn't leave a reply to your review. Thanks for all the advices. This chapter truly have awesome battle details and I love the conclusion especially the jokes between Zora and Halan. The mysterious figure sound really cool already. I'll probably know about him more in the other chapters.

Well, it was kinda rushed, but you still made it work (I really liked the moment the temple rose from the sand). Those new enemies seem interesting and with Dhalia being a non-fighter type they have Halan and others greatly out-numbered. Skipping the losers it's six to three. I wonder how are they gonna get out of this.
Update ASAP!

You sure know how to keep the readers entertained. Even though the arc is over, more foreshadowing. I wonder who those guys at the end were. I'm also glad Folko is joining Halan and others, I really grew to like him. Can't wait to enter the Serpaent's Lair! :D

Zora's fight was cool. It's good to see she can take care of herself, even when wounded... but such an ending. Halan will survive, right? I mean he's the main character.
Excellent work on the fights, I'm off to read more!

So the finally match-up is decided. And Zora's gonna fight too... this may be troublesome for her, since she's still wounded, but Sandros didn't seem like a tough guy when he fought Halan, so I'm not sure.
Either the next chapter should prove very entertaining, just like this one was. Good job.

Yow...that gotta hurt a lot. Very nice details you have there. I don't think you add too much details on the battles. I love your fights, I can only hope to write good as you, senpai! I can hope to see what moves that Halan would come up with to beat Shira.

Wow, that was a beautifully done chapter. The pace is really cool and I love how you conclude with such awesome battle. Your battle details are certainly impeccable. The Black Sun certainly sound dangerous but it's not cool as Halan's spear. I want to see what other forms that it can have lol.