kind of like the notebook.. this makes me sad now... but it was good.. =)

that was sad... i couldn't help but picture tim burton-like people while reading this, just because it sent off that general mood. i like how you can just picture this whole story between these two, and then it's vague at the end at what exactly happened. i also liked how you kept saying, "it was never meant to be", and at the end, "life tore them apart". it was really good. nice poem.

This was very nice. Good job!

Rowan.

wow, i dont think i've ever enjoyed
reading something so tainted with depression
than when i was reading this poem!!
^^ nice!!