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| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 6,  | abuseSorry about the review on chapter seventeen. I mixed the update date and the published date, but I couldn't review again and I knew I didn't review this one, so I just wanted to tell you sorry. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 23, | abuseDamnit! You leave it at that and you don't even finish! But it's kind of a good thing... I might not want to see how Alex reacts. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 22, | abuseSo, I just noticed your last update date. 2006. Why!? Can you please please please continue? I want to know the endingg. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 21, | abuseThat was SO SAD! How could you!? It was sad. And you said it'll get sadder. No fair. About your mom reading it... I think it's cool. My mom's read a few of mine (that I haven't finished), but I've never let her read anything rated M (you know what I mean) because I know I'd never be allowed to write again, but if your mom's cool with it then that's cool. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 20, | abuseI KNEW IT! But she has to tell him. Real soon. And he better take it well. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 19, | abuseI'd love to have a birthday like that. LOL. |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 18, | abuse"Alex hesitated, not wanting to leave her. But Sasha opened her eyes and said quietly, 'Go on, Alex. I’m not gonna be much for company anyways, and I sure don’t want you catching this – it’s hell.'" Aha, he can't. Right? |
| Bubs 2008-07-29 ch 17, | abuseI was expecting the pregnancy thing! It better not ruin anything between them if she is though. I'm not gunna yell at you. =) Because he didn't rape her, just almost. But still, send him a slap for me. |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 16, | abuseAnd that is my new favorite chapter! LOL! I liked their little chat after it happened. I'm just worried about what's going to happen next. And it'll have to wait till tomorrow. =( But I really liked this chapter! |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 15, | abuseProfessional relationship my butt. O, chapter fifteen. Is next! I'm excited. |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 14, | abuseMore and more heat, eh? LOL. I like it. |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 13, | abuseDon't know why, but I like the 'brushing his lips against her nose' thing. LOL. I liked the chapter! =) |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 12, | abuseAw. I feel bad for him and want to give him a hug! Can I, please? |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 11, | abuseNO! Again. You killed the romance. Did her friend HAVE to show up!? There better be more of that. |
| Bubs 2008-07-28 ch 10, | abuseNO! STUPID NO-ROMANCE RULE! That wasn't supposed to happen. |