I really liked this! It was well written and the plotline well developed. Bravo! It would be really cool if you write a sequel. For example, the village could be attacked by a giant dinosaur, such as a T-Rex or a Giganotosaurus. It is only then that his egg hatches, many of the Veiiaret die and the people loose their minds, etc.
Anyways, I really liked it!

Interesting. I liked the way you lead into the explanation of the world with the byplay of the child's knowledge contrasted by the grandfather and the father, and the naming of the Veiiaret and the subsequent renaming into Velociraptors was a touch.


Spelling is decent, though you've dropped a few words here and there. Grammer could use some work. "They're soul is one again?"