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| N.M.E 2008-08-21 ch 16,  | abuseUm...that was the reaction I expected! You did that well. They're so cute already! I can't even imagine if they really become a couple! GOD! Update soon. |
| .hopeless.romantic.x3 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abuseyay! new chapter! but what will happen now?? can't wait for the next one! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abusei love the story! hope you update soon! i can't wait for more! --ifly*hugs* |
| nothings-what-it-seems 2008-08-20 ch 4, | abuseI want Romance! hehe its really good i like it. |
| nothings-what-it-seems 2008-08-20 ch 3, | abuselol he sounds like a very up tight man.but i wish i new what he looked like... |
| nothings-what-it-seems 2008-08-20 ch 2, | abusehaha i love how she talks to here self that is so funny! i hope she does that in the other chaperters too. |
| nothings-what-it-seems 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abusefor a begining that sounds really good i cant wait to read more and see what happends! |
| princessbleachhead 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abuseanother great chapter(thumbs up) oh so kat likes zach, oh we need to arrange a beat dwn lol. i love the chapter, bcz you manage to convey zach's feelings and his personality changing to due falling for valerie. i love zach's little thoughts bcz they always seem to end up appreciating valerie's appearance and personality hehehe. keep going i love it. cant wait for the next chapter. they are falling. great story. lol. |
| alakazam05 2008-08-20 ch 15, | abuseFinally an update! haha. but that was quite unexpected. i'm hoping valerie will not move in, YET. and they're always trying to cover up how they really feel, to a point where it is getting frustrating! i wonder what will happen when instead of saying that's how valerie will feel, she will just say no problem. haha. will zach feel he has offended her. anyway, hope you can update soon! |
| .hopeless.romantic.x3 2008-08-18 ch 15, | abusewow! amazing drama! can't wait for the next chapter!! |
| jean_annette 2008-08-18 ch 15, anon. | abuseHi! I'm always looking forward for a new chapter...Cant wait |
| princessbleachhead 2008-08-18 ch 15, | abuseaah wat if you dont like him luv why are you get mad at kat. hehehe. poor val she falling madly and deeply. he too. great writing i luv it. the communication between them needs to develop like mad. but thats gud. i loved it like mad. |
| CompletelyInsane 2008-08-18 ch 15, | abuseI did enjoy this chapter, too! It was great! |
| Sydney-J 14 2008-08-18 ch 15, | abusewell that was unexpected hope Kat doesnt turn out to be some cow |
| N.M.E 2008-08-18 ch 15, | abuseWHAT? MOVE IN? What exactly does he mean by 'move in'? Man...that was an abrupt way to ask. I can't wait for her reaction. Update soon. |