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| princessbleachhead 2008-10-05 ch 18,  | abusewow. zach cant resist her, he needs to youch her. lol. i loved it. zach likes to control stuff. cant wait for the next chapter, i loved this chapter, i wonder wat zach was thinking. |
| zagato 2008-10-04 ch 18, | abuseThank you for the update. Please write more. |
| LoveToRead 2008-10-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseI love this story. I think Zach and Valerie are so cute together. Are they going to be together in the end. I hope so!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, PLEASE, Update soon. |
| triplet-lemon 2008-10-04 ch 18, | abuseI just finish reading the last chapter u posted, I must say I really like this story. I cant wait to read the next chapter! |
| SJ 2008-10-04 ch 18, anon. | abuseso far so good |
| zagato 2008-09-23 ch 17, | abuseThank you for the update |
| Kbelle1 2008-09-22 ch 17, | abuseGood chapter. |
| ProudToBeALoser 2008-09-22 ch 17, | abusei like it! can't wait for more -Sam |
| princessbleachhead 2008-09-22 ch 17, | abusewow, physical contact heheh great start to it. it is well put innocently. lol. i like zach cz he is a man with a weird man sense of humour. bless val she is falling. does she noe kne about the marriage thing? i wonder. sorry dont know about the pineapple thing lol. iif you can, can you make the chapters a bit longer? i always get depressed when i get to the end.:(. i love your story so much. cant wait for the next chapter, this chapter i loved it bcz of the contact and the emotions slowly developing. later luv |
| N.M.E 2008-09-22 ch 17, | abuseZach is quite the romantic huh? That guy is crazy! Well, at least Val didn't beat him up or anything. That would have been totally wicked, but inappropriate. Maybe because...the ancestors found a resemblance in the two? These guys did crazy things at that time. Stupid people! Well...update soon! |
| Kajal 2008-09-22 ch 17, anon. | abuseI totally warmed up to Zach by the time I got to the last chapter. Can't wait for more! |
| N.M.E 2008-08-21 ch 16, | abuseUm...that was the reaction I expected! You did that well. They're so cute already! I can't even imagine if they really become a couple! GOD! Update soon. |
| .hopeless.romantic.x3 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abuseyay! new chapter! but what will happen now?? can't wait for the next one! |
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You. 2008-08-20 ch 16, | abusei love the story! hope you update soon! i can't wait for more! --ifly*hugs* |
| nothings-what-it-seems 2008-08-20 ch 4, | abuseI want Romance! hehe its really good i like it. |