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| Youkai Author 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's sweet. Nice repition and rhyming scheme. |
| Golddefender 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseUm, look at your summary thing. "Please" has no "q" in it. You might consider fixing that. Good work. I like it. Sounds like a song... |