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| InkySubstance 2007-09-30 ch 3,  | abuseI really like you're way of writing, it's so...I dont know, there's a word for it, but it flows really well, and just has this...peacefulness about it that I like. |
| InkySubstance 2007-09-30 ch 2, | abuseInteresting thoughts,I completely agree with the sentence "Man can only stand rejection for so long before the smile begins to waver, and the faith begins to subside." |
| rust phoenix 2007-05-05 ch 3, | abuseThis is very beautiful and very true; definitely my favorite chapter. I like your way of thinking, and it comes out very strongly in this section, much more so than in previous sections. Not that the previous sections weren't good too, but in this one you have a much clearer voice as a writer. Keep using and developing that voice (sorry, I know I sound really cliche, but it's true). I think there might have been a few missing and misplaced commas. If you're not sure about the punctuation, you should try reading the sentence allowed or going over it in your head a few times. |
| rust phoenix 2007-05-05 ch 2, | abuseThis is very interesting, your opinions are a fascinating read. I think it would be a bit easier to follow if you divided it into smaller paragraphs. Thank you for your review on The Illusionists, I am sorry it took me so long to return it. |
| For What Its Worth 2007-05-02 ch 3, | abuseThe cure is to find something you will never tire of. Something that will be your light in the darkness. Something that will not letyou become like that in the first place. For some it is religion, for others it is their spouse or boyfriend/girlfriend. |
| The Ferrett 2007-04-28 ch 3, | abuseCongratulations, you respond fast and well. ::)) |
| Wolf's Night 2007-04-28 ch 3, | abuseWow..I like your ramblings and surprise surprise I'm still alive!..i think..maybe I'm just not dead yet... anyways coolio. laters |
| Wolf's Night 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHaven't read yet but just saying I think I should fear for my life...your 'odd way of thinking' is proven dangerous :P |
| The Ferrett 2007-04-27 ch 2, | abuseThis is very philisophical. And very true. Wouldn't mind seeing your thoughts on life. Good job. ::)) |
| Stormer 2007-04-15 ch 2, | abuseYou've captured some interesting thoughts here! It's true that hope never seems to die, not completely. There are some people though who have lost hope, I think. And they tend to seek their own destruction. |