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| checkerboxed 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI really really really like the first stanza. That alone could be a poem, all by itself-- its got its own rythm, its own sense of definition... I love it. Thanks for the review, btw. |
| MyDamnedSelf 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI really adore this piece, what thoughts to be having, I'm jealous :) "Rewind, rework, reword, remind that I am not God, to speak and make and thus unmake, though Lucifer tried his damnedest" I'm so infatuated with that stanza, I know you hate rhyming but that first line is gorgeous. |
| Anaare 2007-01-02 ch 1, | abuse"In missing you I’ve changed the background, words, and endings until we must be fated, for I knew you in my dreams." Simply gorgeous. The second stanza somewhat lost the tone, but the ending was brilliant, quite strong and forceful. It sticks with you long after you have finished reading. A wonderful title, too. Yes, a good poem. |