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checkerboxed
2007-01-16
ch 1,
abuseI really really really like the first stanza. That alone could be a poem, all by itself-- its got its own rythm, its own sense of definition... I love it. Thanks for the review, btw.
MyDamnedSelf
2007-01-05
ch 1,
abuseI really adore this piece, what thoughts to be having, I'm jealous :)


"Rewind, rework, reword, remind
that I am not God, to speak
and make and thus unmake,
though Lucifer tried his damnedest"

I'm so infatuated with that stanza, I know you hate rhyming but that first line is gorgeous.
Anaare
2007-01-02
ch 1,
abuse"In missing you I’ve changed
the background, words, and endings
until we must be fated, for
I knew you in my dreams."

Simply gorgeous. The second stanza somewhat lost the tone, but the ending was brilliant, quite strong and forceful. It sticks with you long after you have finished reading. A wonderful title, too. Yes, a good poem.
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