Reviews for Better Off in a Dream

Crimson-Fantasy
2006-12-30
ch 1,

abuseThis is sad but beautifully put. Your talanted with poetry. I think one of your best points might be how raw you express the topics in your work, or at leats in this poem. the idea of dreaming up love is so bittersweet but you made it almost dreamy and not really absolute about anything. Nice work keep it up and keep in touch.

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