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| peewee potato 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseCan't say it is, since I had black hair and thought all diamonds were conflict diamonds. Hey, cool. Some people consider me a hippie too. I love the message you convey in this. It reminds me of that cliche of the 'perfect' family with a huge white mansion and perfect lawn. And it makes me laugh. |
| poetic abortion 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThe questioning of the so-called statement of what is a perfect girl is what I love about this poem, as I wasn't what the statement would consider a "perfect girl." - Noelle |
| AthenAltena 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseHaving been a tomboy with constantly ripped tights I can say this wasn't my experience. I'd love to see what you're going to do with this later. |
| hey maria 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abuseNo. When I was a little girl I had straight black hair and wore gold. I like the statement this makes. About traditional expectations. |