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peewee potato
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseCan't say it is, since I had black hair and thought all diamonds were conflict diamonds.

Hey, cool. Some people consider me a hippie too.

I love the message you convey in this. It reminds me of that cliche of the 'perfect' family with a huge white mansion and perfect lawn. And it makes me laugh.
poetic abortion
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abuseThe questioning of the so-called statement of what is a perfect girl is what I love about this poem, as I wasn't what the statement would consider a "perfect girl."

- Noelle
AthenAltena
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseHaving been a tomboy with constantly ripped tights I can say this wasn't my experience. I'd love to see what you're going to do with this later.
hey maria
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseNo. When I was a little girl I had straight black hair and wore gold.

I like the statement this makes. About traditional expectations.
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