Oh lovely!! I liked this a lot, a VERY well-written poem. The rhymes were great and all of the verses flowed so well, no stumbling or anything. I can relate to it a lot too, so that brings it a little closer to heart. You did an awesome job on this, be proud!

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(speechless, but smiling. Good job)

8) This was amazing! Like, I'm kind of speechless... it's probably my most favorite thing here on fiction press right now... it makes so much sense to me... i'm going to go read more of your stuff now...