Oh, I really like this one. :D I love the whole metaphor of the thing. :]

dunno what to say... definitely know i can say i love this
i started reading then ended up rereading god knows how many times.
=] since can't quite sum it up, i'll just say(well, review) that this is awesome

Amazing..
Stupifying
Awe-Inspiring
Bewildering
Dumbfounding
Nonplussing...
yes i used the thesaurus..but still
...wow...
i love the concept its so...not normal
but in a really good way
xD

That was... absolutely WOW.

I can't stand it.

I really can't stand how good it is

Because this is absolutely amazing.

The language, the concept, the depiction;
it's utterly engaging
drawing its readers in


Congratulations, you have duly earned my respect.

I don't often review so consider this a special treat :/
Excellent...all your work is excellent, your characters are unqiue and intersting, your imagry beautiful. Just keep writing

this is interesting! almost captivating--well i think it is captivating. somehow? HAHA. this is god! :]

Huh. Interesting. This is good, too good for words. I'm actually at a loss for words for once.

Interesting... in a very good way. ^^

Nice and different!

wow
i love it
i think its really cool =D
my type of story!

It's a good idea, mirroring the story to fencing, and it worked wonderfully. It's amusing how they bothe think they have won.

haha... nice. so true too

You fence!

YAY u posted it! *adds to favorites and huggles Izzy for posting* i love this! u know that! it's amazing and i love the fencing part

although i still feel that it is ZH and someone lol