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| Princess-anna57 2007-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome, very inspiring. I especially like the beginning lines. Very powerful. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Landon Stray 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI believe it's "whether" not "weather" but yeah. ery nively done. |
| angel953 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abuseGreat job!! This is very powerful and gives a good message. I especiall y like the ending: "Life. love that!! Just. S.t.o.p.s." You had a few typos here though:"Weather it’s for the best"-should be Whether it's for the best" "You’ll feel higher the "- should be:"You'll feel higher than ..." Great poem though! =D |
| Travis C. Eckert 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseSaw "weather" and should be "whether". Anyway, a good poem. |
| helle xandria encaitarince 2006-12-30 ch 1, | abusepretty, and it gives a good message. i like it, especially how you ended it with slowing down into "S.t.o.p.s." nice. xoxo-xan |