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Gogoh
2007-08-10
ch 1,
abuseOne of my childhood habits that I'm too picky and often selfish, but these lines caught me off guard:

If I am dead, don't leave me alone, love my corpse, make it your home.

I'm sure if you were my friend, I would've gladly loved your corpse.
randompoetry
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseSO GOOD. The subtle rhyming in this is perfect, the descriptions, the feeling, everything!
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