This was pretty good. I completely undertsnda the whole idea of being so fearful of failure, because of everyone's expectations. Pretty amazing job. (Sorry about Demonic Heytred not working.)

the Stranger in the moonlight

I like how you are able to be so succinct with the abstract concepts. So devoutly vague with the unconcrete, "dreams, desires, fears, failure, afraid", bounce in this, like they are in some tumbling geometric painting of terms that swirl in the nebula of emotion. The short, quick hitting line lengths really make this skip so quickly. Very well written. Entertaining as always, as I've missed the philosophical thought bursts that you consistently present. Hope all is well with you. MD:77.

Fiction press is being very annoying and not letting me review... but anyway, let's try this again...

I feel I can relate, in some way, to a lot of this poem, particulary the last verse.

I love the brief lines you have used, they are very strong, and the poem reads very well.