Reviews for Football Fields and Coffee Shops

YC 2008-03-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved the first chapter so far! :D Although the last paragraph, "were" should be "where" and all the "there"'s should be changed to either "they're" or "their". Other than that, everything is marvelous!
Shannon 2007-08-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseDude...I'm speechless...Dude...I almost cried...I almost cried, and in front of my mom and dad no less...Wow...That was...Wow, man...That was sweet...Dude...Wow...
shaneallix 2007-04-03 ch 2,	abuseDUDE! WTF, MAN! WHY'D YA STOP! MAN... IT IS SO AWESOME. BUT I HATE THE SUSPENSE! JUST ADD IN SOME MORE ALREADY! STAY UP UNTIL 3 AM AGAIN AND ADD SOME MORE! WTF!
shaneallix 2007-01-18 ch 1,	abusehey...by the way it's spelled "baritone." I played one at my old school, back when i was a freshman... you know me, by the way...a junior who gives you rides...anyway, sweet story...love the description...as a fellow writer (not on the web, but someday in real life) i love it...this is an awesome opening, leaving us hanging and ready for the next part... so...when do post the next chappie?
Esquirella 2007-01-03 ch 1,	abuseGood set up. Please continue.
Orangeena 2007-01-03 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great start. I hope you update soon, this seems like it will be a very enjoyable story. Can't wait to learn more about Dan and his adventures in this new city. I hope he meets some good people atleast!