hey i really like this poem. also, i am still wondering if i should put myself on fictionpress. my mom isnt sure because once i take something off, it's not copyrighted anymore, so i'll just have to leave stuff on until i can copyright all my stuff. i just want your opinion on it because i would love people, other than yourself, to actually read and have actual criticism and compliments. so yea, do you think i should? because i really want to be on here. *sigh* i dont know what to do. see ya later! email me with your opinion!