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A Vestige of Peace 2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Wow! I loved that! huh.. that was strange, I just came upon it so randomly, and it struck me. Really delicate, I liked it.
Mario Barrenechea 2006-12-31 . chapter 1
Bend but don't break...

This poem, strikingly different from the others I've read, bends to its form. It's interesting to read simply because 1) there isn't much to read, and 2) of its shape.

In effect, all of the words in this particular poem are accented, especially "A pity." Because the title is "Bend but don't break" I believe that the words "bend", or they accomodate for any size, but it never "breaks", or there never is an intrusion in the phrases.

I find this poem one of the best I've seen so far in this site, not because of its size, but because of its message. Although, everyone looks at it differently, right?

Nice job.
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