beautiful

Oh! This one was so good, too! "I buried my heart so none could steal

the memory of my love’s laughter." That was beautiful.

i really love the flow of this. to me it has the rhythm of a nursery rhyme in a twisted bittersweet way. very singsong and sway like. the rhyming ending words give a nice effect!

That's a beautiful poem.

I could even be bold enough to say that it reminds me of "Annabelle Lee" by Edgar A. Poe. :D