Not bad. You did the present-tense in a completely tolerable way. I just wonder why you chose to do it like that since it's so much more challenging in word choice...

But anyway, yeah, not too bad. I like the characters, and you were good at pairing teasers. xP Even though the werewolf/vampire war thing is kind of over done, meh, I'll give this story a shot anyway. :]]

I'll be reading the update. n__n