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| TehDoomWriter 2007-01-12 ch 1,  | abuseNow, THIS is what I'm talking about. (Really great work, I like the repetition, the single separation of the "Oh...") Fav. |
| the-foresight 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseGreat stuff, wonderful metaphor with the ocean. You brought loads of layers to the theme but still kept you message clear. Good work! |