I'm a true fan of rhythm... and this piece has it.

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Please keep writing!

I love the story in this poem, and the way the fortune teller's voice really comes through. Your rhyme and the length of the individual lines gave the poem a great flow: the beginning especially sounded smooth and natural [it got a little clunky around "for it is set/in the night sky", but the last line was a good solid note].

Nice to see some more rhyming poems on FP! :-)

~Bitter Irony