Hahahhaa.

That was funny.

It would be sweet if a guy like Pyro did come along, though.

I thought it would be a happy ending, but then that would be kind if cliche, hunh?

whAT THE? a great story! but there is no hapy ending? ah! is there going to be more? loved it!

Please, you have to make a sequel/something to end this the way you know we all want it to end(though I do see how you wouldn't want to. End it in a cliche, I mean.). Still, whether or not you re-complete it, it'll still be one of my favorites. Though, that last part just about broke my heart. You really make me feel for poor little Pyro. Keep up the great work!

Emerald and Pyro, eh? Interesting nicknames.

It's a shame they didn't get together at the end, but they're only seventh-graders, so there's still plenty of time. I like that there were a few tender moments too, despite all the humor. Those moments are what prove that Pyro really cares about her, not his 500-plus spontaneous verbal attacks. XD

“You’ve been asking me out all year, and I’m just now ‘the girl of your dreams’?”

LMAO, busted. Anyway, this was nice. I want to check out your English Paper now, but uh, my essay is calling for me to start it. Perhaps in the near future...

- Shdwphoenix

I like it. Pyro sounds like this one dude I used to know...but he's dead now, so I gotta go dance on his grave! Favorites!

it made me laugh. I wish she would have finally said yes to Pyro. Maybe you could write another chapter, it could be like, five years later (or possibly less) and he asks her one more time and then she says yes and then they get married and live happily ever after or something like that. just an idea.

It is a one shot ? Because i was so hoping she was going to say yes at the end ! She broke his heart ! Isn't she going to realize that now she miss him asking and bothering her ? Isn't she going to go after him ?
But it is a fun story besides the sad ending.

"Rose: check. Breath: check. Pants: check." This line cracked me up.

Poor Pyro. Even though he's kind of stalker-ish and delusional, I feel a bit sorry for him. Still, Emerald going out with him in the end would have excused his creepy behaviour so I'm glad she kept saying no. That girl has a lot more patience than I do, that's for sure!

The dialogue-only part didn't bother me. It's a good testament to your character building skills that it was obvious who was speaking even without the tags.

I honestly find this story endearing, cute, funny, sad and annoying[in a good way :)]
I thought that pyro might die near the end because she kept wishing death upon him and I thought she would regret it and feel as if it were her fault. but when the two boys talked about how the bet had turned out, I cracked up in laughter. Great Job! :p

I like it. very cute. makes me smile.
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I like this a lot. Pyro's a interesting character. Maybe a bit of a masochist.

(ps I was trying to read all the stories dealing with Pyro and the rest but I can't tell which story is which and the chronological order. Help!)

Aww, that's so sad. Not to mention persistent.

This is really cute, but I was hoping she would say yes in the end. I guess that would be too cliche. very cute!