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Exodus.Escence Of Sin
2007-07-25
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abuseI dont quite get this poem at all. At one of your other profiles, you said that on this one you write darker poems. I dont feel much darkness in this one to say the least. I feel some emotion but not enough to lead on something though. I appreciate the try, i think you should write some more and then your talent will grow in this area.



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