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| armchairs 2008-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseThis is wonderful. You couldn't change it anywhere. |
| BrokenHeart4Eva 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseyou have skills i have never seen before... this poem made me both cry and somehow have hope for my own torn love... thank you |
| Little Crayon 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThat's so beautiful. Not only is it written expertly, but the imagery is gorgeous, and the message is amazing. |
| poesia di amore 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really good. |
| Numbed from rejection 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful! |
| Un Lobo Solitario 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseMarvelous. The best piece of writing I've read on here so far. My only complaint would be the last verse, as it breaks the flow established by the previous. Nice imagery, varied vocabulary, and good structure and flow. You are a good poet. |
| L. X. Petrik 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI like this one. honest, differant, RHYMING! That's a huge one for me. Yes, I think I like this one. |
| Pullingxthextriggerxallxwro... 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, good job. |