Amazing. Gorgeous. Beautiful. I absolutely adore this poem. It's just so...beautiful. The words flow and fit wonderfully and your message is written across in an undefinable way; it's a good trait. Great job, I love this!

this reminds me so much of the anime AIR, which, i must say, i have fallen in love with nearly as much as your poem. you have truly outdone yourself. :kowtows: don't think my words to be rash or baseless; rather, they are spoken with heart.

(if you want to borrow AIR, by the way, do tell me=)