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singxmextoxsleep-13 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
pretty good, of course i can relate. I really like it, and you got the title perfect!
Black and White Dreams 2007-02-12 . chapter 1
Aww... ='( That's so sad...

I just thing you're a bit to repetitive with the line "Since you're gone". Also, in the sixth line, you say: "I wondering when you'll come back." That should be "I'm wondering when you'll come back" or "I wonder when you'll come back."

Good job though. Sweet, but sad.

~Black and White Dreams~
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