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| R. Sharmayne 2007-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseI feel like everytime I read a piece of your work I'm being enchanted by prayers or some sort of spell. Gets your kundalini going! Fabulous job, you write like a godess. |
| Evenunderscore 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuselisten, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours. |
| Signals Progress 2007-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Great job. |
| Briar's Thorn 2007-01-09 ch 1, | abusei love it. i don't know what else to say it is beautiful. it is a true delight to read your work Ms.Crippled Dark Angels Nightmares. i'm adding this to my favs. please R&R my work. |
| ChildeOfChaos 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseDefinately a kewl poem, great last line. I really enjoyed this one. |
| Black and White Dreams 2007-01-04 ch 1, | abuseAw... thank you so much for the review and adding my poem to your C2! I love this! Beautiful and breathtaking. Vivid imagery. I love the first verse. Absolutely beautiful. Adding to my fav. stories! ~Black and White Dreams~ |
| Long Nights In 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat Job! |
| Guess Who? 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this one too! Um.. I like the way that it ends. |
| Nemonus 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like the twist between the fourth and fifth-sixth lines. This prose-poem combo has a story in it which sounds interesting. I say prose-poem because that's what it sounds like; like a speech rather than a song, per se. That's cool though. Pretty good wording--pretty, anyway. The first line is a fragment. I thought that that'd be ok if it were a poem, but them the next line is very proselike and there isn't a rhyme scheme so therein lies that confusion. I do like this. It's nice to think over. There's interesting and seeping-in emotion in it. "The light you once where"--ought to be 'were', there. |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseNOTE: I wrote this a long time ago when I was low, and I wanted to look at the bright side of things. Thinking that you should always get over it, and rise again. I like it anyway. I hope that you will like it too. Best Wishes, Tiffany |