I feel like everytime I read a piece of your work I'm being enchanted by prayers or some sort of spell. Gets your kundalini going! Fabulous job, you write like a godess.

listen, I understand that you may have had a bad day or what not, but what you said was still rude. I said that I liked your poem. Anyway, if you take your comment off of my poem, I will take all of mine off of yours.

I liked it. Great job.

i love it. i don't know what else to say it is beautiful. it is a true delight to read your work Ms.Crippled Dark Angels Nightmares. i'm adding this to my favs. please R&R my work.

Definately a kewl poem, great last line. I really enjoyed this one.

Aw... thank you so much for the review and adding my poem to your C2!

I love this! Beautiful and breathtaking. Vivid imagery. I love the first verse. Absolutely beautiful. Adding to my fav. stories!

~Black and White Dreams~

Great Job!

I love this one too! Um.. I like the way that it ends.

Ooh, I like the twist between the fourth and fifth-sixth lines. This prose-poem combo has a story in it which sounds interesting.

I say prose-poem because that's what it sounds like; like a speech rather than a song, per se. That's cool though. Pretty good wording--pretty, anyway.

The first line is a fragment. I thought that that'd be ok if it were a poem, but them the next line is very proselike and there isn't a rhyme scheme so therein lies that confusion.

I do like this. It's nice to think over. There's interesting and seeping-in emotion in it.

"The light you once where"--ought to be 'were', there.

NOTE:

I wrote this a long time ago when I was low, and I wanted to look at the bright side of things. Thinking that you should always get over it, and rise again. I like it anyway. I hope that you will like it too.

Best Wishes,

Tiffany