i foudn you on wf and so i decided to read your story! woot woot! so there was a typo in the first paragraph with male and mail. other than that this was very unique and interesting not to mention dark. this is all a compliment by the way. nice work.

Wow...I would actually hate it if I died a virgin, and I would hate it even worse if I died a child in a zombie attack.
Well written, but then again, it's almost expected from you =P
Rachael.

Wow, this is incredible Dom (hope you don't mind me calling you that; force of habit and all). The way you've captured the tragedy through the simple innocence of a child's letter is chilling. This really got to me... And the spelling mistakes made it all the more real. This really is great work :D It was a pleasure (if a somewhat disturbing one) to read.

You have a gift for horror. Really, you do. It's all very classic, not like the recent orgies of blood and gore that grace the silver screen these days. It's reminiscent of the classics, and even of Shakespeare and Ancient Greek tragedies in that you understand that you don't have to see the deaths and gory acts to feel the sorrow and fear they provoke. It's humanizing, which I honestly never thought I would say about zombie stories, but I mean it.

I think it would be great to see a zombie movie with such a human and tragedy oriented perspective. It would be so much more interesting than the pointless horror movies I've seen recently.

It was so cute...But you should spell "listen" with "lissen" because with a child of such spelling abilities, it makes more sense, also spell the "too" with one "o" it just makes it better for the reader to enjoy when they realize how young the character is. Sorry, that last sentence barely made sense. Loved it, though.
Serpent of Nephthys~

this is very interesting. i'd lik eto read more unless this is a one shot, except, how would you continue it? really make santa real?