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Aibari 2007-01-13 ch 1,	abuseAw, that was awfully melancholic - I almost cried there, at the end. (That might, of course, be hormones, but this thing didn't help. :P) As usual, you're absoloutely brilliant at writing, and I couldn't love you more for it. It's really damn hard, finding good fiction online, but your fics are always Heck Yeah-fics. I mean, you write better than some of the published authors out there. This one was great - melancholic, like I said, and the kind that makes you stare puppy eyed at the screen afterwards, wondering why the world is so cruel. Which is brilliant. Yesh. :)
Mossberg 2007-01-08 ch 1,	abusethat was a rather impressive short. Cameron's character reminded me of myself, and the main character of a few girls I've known. I think the story deals well with change in a relationship. My final interpretation is that the main character wanted to move on past Cameron, but wouldn't admit it to herself.
summerbee 2007-01-01 ch 1,	abusem. very pretty. i like the way everything's not a fairytale ending, but also the way that everything isn't horribly tragic. it's a nice, realistic mix of good and bad. i also like a lot of your details- little things like, the girl's nose tingling when she's about to cry. it's things like that that help a person really understand and identify with what you wrote. anyway, very nice work.