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Reviews For: Journey To The Fifth Continent

PrincessJo
2007-03-04
ch 2, anon.
abuseI loved it!! This would have to be my most fav story so far...

Jo
GilanSalehi
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abusePresent tense...! Now there's something you don't see every day. Tom's got some cute antics. :). I like the way it adds to the immediacy of the scene, which really helps if you have suspense later on (I noticed Action/Adventure in the story's genre classification). Keep updating!
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