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| PrincessJo 2007-03-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved it!! This would have to be my most fav story so far... Jo |
| GilanSalehi 2007-01-01 ch 1, | abusePresent tense...! Now there's something you don't see every day. Tom's got some cute antics. :). I like the way it adds to the immediacy of the scene, which really helps if you have suspense later on (I noticed Action/Adventure in the story's genre classification). Keep updating! |