|Reviews for Gravity|
| Slightly Ajar 11/22/08 . chapter 1
Aw, I like this. It's tragicly romantic, but not fluffy or overdone. I like the inserted thought: "you're years too late, dear." I could feel the regret and sadness just by that, even if none of the other emotions were so clearly and beautifully shown. Well done!
| Kamikoko 6/20/07 . chapter 1
Ah - this is brilliantly written.
Great work describing the setting, background and characters in such a short piece.
Even without the lengthy process of "getting to know" your characters, the emotions are clearly felt by the reader (me).
| ashes.rising 1/1/07 . chapter 1
Wow, that just ripped my heart out. Excellent job on the description of the setting, most people either go too far or don't have enough, but you have a good balance going in this. Kudos.
| Cracked Pepper 1/1/07 . chapter 1
That's really sad.
You should make a novel out of this.
It would be really good.