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| NothingMoreNothingLess 2008-06-10 ch 3,  | abuseI read the entire thing, and it's amazing, but this chapter is just gorgeous. Cassandra |
| girls will be boys 2008-06-01 ch 5, | abuseyou put so much emotion in only a few words, ha-ha. (i never seen things so beautiful.) |
| sheisdressedinpoetry 2008-05-22 ch 5, | abuse[We're happy, she said. We're happy. Were happy.] Gradual progression to "were" is divine. [His lip curled. You laugh too loudly, he said.] this one small image reveals so much. someone who can cut off another person's happiness with a criticism that will lead them straight back to self-consciousness is capable of the worst cruelties. |
| sheisdressedinpoetry 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseThis clenched me from the start. i never hear about those who do not instigate yet having no impact seems one thousand times worse than causing destruction. |
| painted.music 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusekonnichi wa Wow, this is really interesting. I was drawn in by the two-liner at first -- "Some people change you life. / Some people try." It was such a simplistic statement, but it insinuated so much. I always loved flash fiction... could never write it, though. I tried once and then realized that it crashed (and burned). I'm not one to give up, so I may try again... But, alas, I digress. :P Is this due for another update any time soon? Ha det -Shan- |
| Gossamer Heart 2008-03-20 ch 5, | abuseIt hurt. But it hurt so good. You are quite possibly brilliance embodied. |
| laughter at the funeral 2008-02-29 ch 5, | abusethis is just ohsopretty "did you ever think you mattered?" now that's something we all should ponder upon truly yours... |
| perpetual questions 2008-02-11 ch 5, | abuseI love how it seems to tell a story with short sentences and vignettes. Very nice. |
| MinorUrsa 2008-02-04 ch 5, | abusethen the little girl laughed and it was just right |
| Tytherpol 2007-08-02 ch 4, | abusethese are absolutely beautiful. |
| Hax Rook 2007-06-23 ch 4, | abuse"she spelled the letters against the pulse in his wrist".. i really like that. i feel like this piece is pleasingly deformed. the chapter format is kind of neat too. |
| luv me like no other 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if I would offend you if I said that I laughed when i read this, but I found it funny. It's jsut so true, and so sad. |
| pandaspots 2007-05-24 ch 3, | abuseIt's amazing how you can utterly kill me in 18 words or less. you're ama--sing. |
| Elenive 2007-05-07 ch 4, | abuseThe complexity in your words astound me. It's as if you continuously transform a cardboard box into a masterpiece. That's really the only way I can explain it right now. I enjoy reading all of your pieces. You are very very talented. |
| belle.nisce 2007-05-03 ch 4, | abuseGah. You amaze me. There's something so brokenly beautiful about this. I love how you can convey such feeling in such few words. I'm only going to review this one of your works but I've read a lot of them and let me say, ordinary mortals like us strive to write like you one day. Seriously. |