I can't even begin to comprehend how anyone can be so amazing, especially in so little words.

I read the entire thing, and it's amazing, but this chapter is just gorgeous.

Cassandra

you put so much emotion
in only a few words, ha-ha.

(i never seen things so beautiful.)

[We're happy, she said. We're happy. Were happy.] Gradual progression to "were" is divine.

[His lip curled. You laugh too loudly, he said.] this one small image reveals so much. someone who can cut off another person's happiness with a criticism that will lead them straight back to self-consciousness is capable of the worst cruelties.

This clenched me from the start.
i never hear about those who do not instigate yet having no impact seems one thousand times worse than causing destruction.

konnichi wa

Wow, this is really interesting. I was drawn in by the two-liner at first -- "Some people change you life. / Some people try." It was such a simplistic statement, but it insinuated so much.

I always loved flash fiction... could never write it, though. I tried once and then realized that it crashed (and burned). I'm not one to give up, so I may try again...

But, alas, I digress. :P

Is this due for another update any time soon?

Ha det
-Shan-

It hurt. But it hurt so good.

You are quite possibly brilliance embodied.

this is just ohsopretty

"did you ever think you mattered?"

now that's something we all should ponder upon

truly yours...

I love how it seems to tell a story with short sentences and vignettes. Very nice.

then the little girl laughed

and it was just right

these are absolutely beautiful.

"she spelled the letters against the pulse in his wrist".. i really like that.
i feel like this piece is pleasingly deformed. the chapter format is kind of neat too.

I don't know if I would offend you if I said that I laughed when i read this, but I found it funny. It's jsut so true, and so sad.

It's amazing how you can utterly kill me in 18 words or less.

you're ama--sing.

The complexity in your words astound me. It's as if you continuously transform a cardboard box into a masterpiece. That's really the only way I can explain it right now.

I enjoy reading all of your pieces. You are very very talented.